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Empatheias Mods ([personal profile] simpathis) wrote2014-05-22 12:35 am

[ ARCHIVED ] [ application ]

— OLD APPLICATION POST —

CURRENT APPLICATION ENTRY CAN BE FOUND HERE.


IMPORTANT!Applications are on a monthly cycle. They run from the 1st thru the 4th of each month. The cycle opens at 12:00AM CST and close at 11:59PM CST. Notices will be sent out all at once at the end of the cycle, and no later than 24 hours after the end of the cycle.

Before applying, please be sure to read the following:

  • Read the Rules and the Game Information.
  • Double check the Reserves and Taken Characters lists to make sure the character you're applying for is not on the list. Also check the comments in case the entry has yet to be updated, as well as any pending applications.
  • Feel free to use the most recent test drive both for practice as well as to use for samples. IMPORTANT! If you submit threads as samples, you must submit the application with that character journal. This is the only way we can ensure that the samples are from you and not someone else.
  • Linked samples must have been made within the past year.
  • You may apply for up to two characters per cycle.
  • Application challenges are allowed. Reserves will have priority, but it's not definitive. We will choose the better application regardless.
  • Do not plagiarize. If we find that the information provided was directly taken by either another player or source material such a wiki, the application will be rejected immediately. If we find this after processing the application, we will revoke the application and have you removed from the game with potential ban.
  • Reusing your own applications from other games is allowed. We only ask any original written samples to conform to our game. That is, we don't want to read samples that are set specifically for another game's premise. Note: this does not apply to threads linked from other games used as samples.
  • If you are rejected, you cannot reapply for the same character until the next cycle. However, you can apply for a different character in the same cycle.
  • Those accepted must fill out all of the required entries within a week to be considered part of the game. Otherwise, we will consider it a revocation of the application.
  • Fill out the form and comment to this entry! You can either paste the application directly to the entry or link it from your own journal/musebox.


⌈ PLAYER SECTION ⌉

Player:
Contact: Journal/Plurk/AIM — anything to help identify since someone might share your name handle.
Age: You must be at least 13 years old to apply.
Current Characters: If a new player, just put "N/A"


⌈ CHARACTER SECTION ⌉

Character:
Age:
Canon:
Canon Point:

Background: We do not need a play by play of their life. You can of course provide one, but it's not necessary. A summary of their role in the canon and important events involving their character will suffice. Wiki links are allowed.

Personality: Tell us everything you can about how the character works. What are their quirks, reasons for thinking, habits, and flaws—basically we want to know not only how they act, but also why they act that way. You are free to use canon as examples, but be sure to explain why you are referencing the event.

Abilities: If there are any particular abilities the character has supernatural or otherwise, list them here. Referencing to a wiki list is acceptable. However, if there are any particular abilities that need to be weakened or removed, note them here.

Alignment: Please refer to the Alignment entry to choose which alignment your character would most likely fall under. Include a brief (a couple of sentences max) just to help explain why you think your choice is the best fit.

Other: Anything else you'd like to mention.


⌈ SAMPLE SECTION ⌉

Sample: We have two requirements for the sample:

  • Character Portrayal. We should see examples of the character's dialogue as well as some introspection or additional narrative to further show how you intend to write the character. This is the most important part of the sample and where most of the weight will be.
  • Use of Emotions. This is our "game setting" requirement. Essentially we want to ensure that you have a basic grasp of the game's premise, especially with the use of emotions. It can be a small scene, even incidental to the main sample. For apathetic characters or those who do not exhibit emotions easily, an alternative is to describe what the character is doing instead and essentially show how they behave in such a manner. For example, if a character is set in a scenario that would normally provoke an emotional response, what do they do instead? What is their mindset and their reaction instead? This portion doesn't have to be lengthy and can even be a couple of sentences to a paragraph. Also keep in mind that subtle and passive effects count, so you do not have to try and create something exuberant or extreme. A calm wind will work just as well as a raging storm, so feel free to be as simple or creative as you want.

The sample can be "written" in three different ways and you can choose which one will work best for you:

  1. Test Drive. You can utilize our test drive to cover both requirements of the sample. So long as there is enough character portrayal and a scene with an emotional reaction, be it within the prompt or done during the thread, then it will satisfy both requirements.
  2. Link out + Written. You can link to threads/entries from other games, memes, or museboxes to show character portrayal, and then write an additional short scene for the emotion portion of the sample.
  3. Original Sample. You can write a complete sample that shows both character portrayal and a scene involving emotion use. This can be one sample or two separate samples. If you opt to write an original sample, you are welcome to use any prompts from any of our Test Drives, Intro Logs, Task Board, and even past events. You are also free to change things up and are not restricted to any of these prompts. They are just here to help offer ideas.

Format wise, you can use either [ brackets ] OR narrative prose. We do require that the writing at least be coherent, have proper sentence structure, and is mostly grammatically correct (we realize that writing styles can be loose/creative in [ bracket ] form so we're giving a bit more leeway). One last suggestion we have is try to have the character interacting with the environment and try thinking of the sample less of a narrative piece but more like a post or thread prompt you might make in the game. That will help the sample show not only how you will write the character, but also how you will play them in practice.


Questions: If you have any questions, ask them here.



Clean copy and paste form here:

spiritedafey: game, happy (Default)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] spiritedafey 2016-07-06 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Interesting! Thanks for the answer, I'll keep that in mind for the future!

And this is the journal~
i_think: (usami-chan!)

[personal profile] i_think 2016-07-06 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll be using this journal for the game!
timemachine: (14)

Revised!

[personal profile] timemachine 2016-07-06 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I figured one day my mathematics background would show with my terrible English!

Hopefully this is better!

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It’s pretty easy for Akane to give into maid culture. Being a Japanese young woman along with the fact she often puts on a cute façade, she figured it would be an easy job. A job like this isn’t annoying at all; it’s honestly distracting her annoyance of being stuck in this place. Even her emotional response shows that she’s completely into the role as she sparkles. With her cat ears and tail, she honestly looks like the ideal maid.

"La, la, la, la~♪! Here you are, Master! I truly hope you enjoy your meal."

Once she gives the order to the customers, she curtsies while canting her head to the side. While she’s playing this kind of maid, she figures she’ll keep up with the act. Turning around, she ‘trips’ over herself face first on to the floor. It takes her a moment to get up, but when she does she continues her airhead act, tapping her fist against her head while sticking her tongue out like a typical airhead would.

"I-I'm okay. I just tripped on accident. Thank you for worrying about me, Masters! I'll be back with your orders in one short moment!"

Once she's in the kitchen, the energetic act backs off even though she’s still wearing a gentle smile. It really is easy for her to act this part as well as giving the emotional response that matches. Though a large part of that may be because she enjoys this carefree life here where she doesn’t have to plan her next step so she ensures she’s alive tomorrow. So while she does worry about what she could be doing to help Earth in her own way, some part of her really is grateful to be away from it all even if there’s a slight guilt in feeling that way. That current conflict in emotion can be seen as two thunder clouds above her head. One is white and one is dark gray, both which shoot lightning, representing her emotional frame of mind when she’s not as guarded around people. However, once someone enters the room, she puts on her grossly cute façade as well as the sparkling emotional response to go with it.

With a new order ready for the customers, she replies to the chef:

"Is it ready? Thank you! I'll be sure to give this to our Masters immediately!"

Once she takes the tray she goes skipping out into the diner and plays her part. She figures no one ever needs to know the true burden she bears.
Edited (fkjdalsj;fjdk;al i hate english) 2016-07-06 21:00 (UTC)
sonofadoor: (Default)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] sonofadoor 2016-07-06 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
This is the journal I'll be using!

Thank you for the response! Would the size of a great dane be acceptable?
pennilessly: (13.)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] pennilessly 2016-07-06 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
this is the journal i'll be using!!! ♥ ty~
timemachine: (2)

[personal profile] timemachine 2016-07-06 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you this is my journal.
sonofadoor: (Default)

[personal profile] sonofadoor 2016-07-06 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent! Thank you again :>
eternalcutie: sinspire @ lj (that's not so bad.)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] eternalcutie 2016-07-06 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
it me
faithfulflame: (Priestess Secrets and Truths)

[personal profile] faithfulflame 2016-07-06 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you mods. I'll be using this journal.
vela_nova: (Happy)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] vela_nova 2016-07-06 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Just this journal!
fulltimeheroine: (Look; my liege!)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] fulltimeheroine 2016-07-06 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll be using this journal!!
tenyearslost: (Default)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] tenyearslost 2016-07-07 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
Hello,

This is the journal I'll be using! Also, I had a question on my application about contacting Peromei, should I PM you or wait for a response?
chainofrevenge: (chatty vibes)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] chainofrevenge 2016-07-07 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
repositories: thingamajig.dw (pic#10267964)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] repositories 2016-07-07 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
I'll be using this journal, thank you!
histrionic: (we take what we're given)

[personal profile] histrionic 2016-07-07 06:54 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! This is the journal.
yournewcaptain: ONWARDS TO SHIPBUILDING (laugh)

[personal profile] yournewcaptain 2016-07-07 07:47 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Just this one. :3
Edited 2016-07-07 07:47 (UTC)
twotailedgenius: (Default)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] twotailedgenius 2016-07-07 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoops, forgot to reply to this! This is the journal /o/
dekuru: (school notes)

[personal profile] dekuru 2016-07-07 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Here's the revisions!

Hopefully it's more organized and easier to read.
dekuru: (Default)

[personal profile] dekuru 2016-07-07 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I'll be using this journal here! Thank you.