While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
The "emotion sample" is missing from the application. We just need you to have a scene where the emotions are affecting the environment. It can be brief and can be added to your current samples. In addition, the application, particularly the sample, was a bit hard to read due to various grammatical and spelling errors. If you could clean those up that would be great.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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The "emotion sample" is missing from the application. We just need you to have a scene where the emotions are affecting the environment. It can be brief and can be added to your current samples. In addition, the application, particularly the sample, was a bit hard to read due to various grammatical and spelling errors. If you could clean those up that would be great.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!