While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We have two concerns regarding your application. For the sample, the writing was a little stilted and thus made it hard to follow. There were also grammatical errors that should be fixed. The second concern is Yuna's abilities. Currently, there is no way for her to recharge her phone. It's possible for there to be a workaround, but we'd need to discuss that further with you about what could work.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
Revision
We have two concerns regarding your application. For the sample, the writing was a little stilted and thus made it hard to follow. There were also grammatical errors that should be fixed. The second concern is Yuna's abilities. Currently, there is no way for her to recharge her phone. It's possible for there to be a workaround, but we'd need to discuss that further with you about what could work.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!