Unfortunately we've determined that your application had too many errors or did not meet up to our standards to allow a revision. These are the concerns with your application:

After a lot of review and deliberation, we have determined that your application does not meet with our standards of writing quality. The sample in particular was very bare bones and minimal, and the personality read as a list of traits rather than an actual personality with reason, thought, and understanding of the character behind it. As the application stands, it does not give much sign that a lot of effort was put in place nor did it display a good, well rounded understanding of the character. Thus it would require more work than would be allowed for a revision.