While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
The "emotion sample" is missing from the application. We just need you to have a scene where the emotions are affecting the environment. It can be brief and can be added to your current samples.
In addition, we noticed a large number of spelling and grammatical errors in both your application and your provided sample. We would like to see your application rewritten to eliminate these, and an increased level of care in your new sample.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
Revision
The "emotion sample" is missing from the application. We just need you to have a scene where the emotions are affecting the environment. It can be brief and can be added to your current samples.
In addition, we noticed a large number of spelling and grammatical errors in both your application and your provided sample. We would like to see your application rewritten to eliminate these, and an increased level of care in your new sample.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!