While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

While the Personality section touches on many of Hamilton's characteristic, there doesn't seem to much in terms of how you, the player, interpret or give reason for those characteristics. It seems that you are relying mostly on the musical. It's perfectly fine to extrapolate with what you think! We also noticed that you neglected to mention Aaron Burr within the application itself. Even though it's covered in the linked Wiki, we would like to see his influence reflected in the Personality section. The same goes for Eliza. Thus we would like for you to add and expand on these two figures as well as give a bit more of your interpretation on Hamilton as to the why's of how he behaves and thinks.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!