While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
For the sample, we'd like to see a separate one written that gives a bit more introspection for Papyrus to help show some of his motivations, reasoning, or indirect thought processes. We'd also like you to include a bit more for the emotion sample as the current was a little too bare to meet our standards.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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For the sample, we'd like to see a separate one written that gives a bit more introspection for Papyrus to help show some of his motivations, reasoning, or indirect thought processes. We'd also like you to include a bit more for the emotion sample as the current was a little too bare to meet our standards.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!