While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We'd like for you to expand on Akashi's personality to describe and explain more about how and why he goes into these different personality states. In addition, you're lacking an emotion sample so we need you to add that as well. Just in case you may have been confused, the emotion sample is to show a player's understanding on one of the game's core mechanics, the emotion effects that can influence one's surroundings.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We'd like for you to expand on Akashi's personality to describe and explain more about how and why he goes into these different personality states. In addition, you're lacking an emotion sample so we need you to add that as well. Just in case you may have been confused, the emotion sample is to show a player's understanding on one of the game's core mechanics, the emotion effects that can influence one's surroundings.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!