While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
First, we need you to reformat your application using our form. Secondly, there seems to be a lack of the required emotion sample. As a reminder, we require samples to have some example of the character's emotions affecting their environment. It doesn't have to be a huge thing! Just enough so that we as readers can see that something is happening. Before we can process your app we'll need to see revisions on both of these points.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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First, we need you to reformat your application using our form. Secondly, there seems to be a lack of the required emotion sample. As a reminder, we require samples to have some example of the character's emotions affecting their environment. It doesn't have to be a huge thing! Just enough so that we as readers can see that something is happening. Before we can process your app we'll need to see revisions on both of these points.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!