While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

Just a small request, but we would like to see more from your personality section, chiefly how Skwydd handles his broken trust and betrayal issues as well as how he deals with the abandonment that has occurred in his history. We believe this is important to hear more about because it is relevant to the alignment you have chosen.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!