Frozen momentarily in absolute shock, Balder stared helplessly as his beloved fell lifelessly to the ground. He rushed quickly to her side and scooped her within his arms. Blood poured profusely from her wounds staining his white and gold coat with red. "Rosa! No, why did you--" Balder couldn't find the right words to say. As much as he tried to protect her when their clans turned against them, Balder couldn't believe he failed to do just that. "I was supposed to die...not you." He mournfully sobbed as he embraced her.
Rosa whispered something in his ear but panic building within deafened him. All he could hear was the rapid drumming of his heart and Rosa's shuddering. Tears streaked down his face a she held her as close as he could. This couldn't be the end of them. After all these long years, this couldn't be the end of them.
"Jubileus..."He prayed. "Spare her. Please, spare her." Even though he knew that his God couldn't hear him anymore, he still prayed anyway. Balder glanced down at his wife with both regret and fear in his eyes.
She's dying. Rosa is dying and there's not a thing he could do to stop it.
The ground begun to quake a little and the ground itself begun to crack. With Rosa's every dying breath, Balder could feel his rage building. This was his fault. He ruined her and tainted her with his love. All of this treachery fell upon him just as equally as her murderer.
Her murderer...
Balder clenched his teeth and almost let out a snarl. He'll never forgive this. He'll never forgive.
"I'll avenge you." He muttered once he felt the last of her essence slip away. "I'll avenge you and our daughter both..." Reluctantly letting go of her now limp hand, Balder glanced up to find Rosa's killer standing before him with a twisted smile.
"I'll...KILL you!"
The very earth around him splits apart with a tremendous growl. The air felt thick and heavy like smoldering flames. Balder's sorrow had given away to pure hatred. No longer were there tears upon his face but rather the fierce near demonic gaze of a man who truly lost everything.
His heart included.
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As for his ability to do "Angel Summoning", when I apped this game last time--The mods then didn't have much of an issue with his powers as long as I nerfed them a little. I can completely take out his ability to summon angel if this is truly problematic. However, I wasn't aware that this would be an issue.
Re: Revision
"ROSA!"
Frozen momentarily in absolute shock, Balder stared helplessly as his beloved fell lifelessly to the ground. He rushed quickly to her side and scooped her within his arms. Blood poured profusely from her wounds staining his white and gold coat with red. "Rosa! No, why did you--" Balder couldn't find the right words to say. As much as he tried to protect her when their clans turned against them, Balder couldn't believe he failed to do just that. "I was supposed to die...not you." He mournfully sobbed as he embraced her.
Rosa whispered something in his ear but panic building within deafened him. All he could hear was the rapid drumming of his heart and Rosa's shuddering. Tears streaked down his face a she held her as close as he could. This couldn't be the end of them. After all these long years, this couldn't be the end of them.
"Jubileus..."He prayed. "Spare her. Please, spare her." Even though he knew that his God couldn't hear him anymore, he still prayed anyway. Balder glanced down at his wife with both regret and fear in his eyes.
She's dying. Rosa is dying and there's not a thing he could do to stop it.
The ground begun to quake a little and the ground itself begun to crack. With Rosa's every dying breath, Balder could feel his rage building. This was his fault. He ruined her and tainted her with his love. All of this treachery fell upon him just as equally as her murderer.
Her murderer...
Balder clenched his teeth and almost let out a snarl. He'll never forgive this. He'll never forgive.
"I'll avenge you." He muttered once he felt the last of her essence slip away. "I'll avenge you and our daughter both..." Reluctantly letting go of her now limp hand, Balder glanced up to find Rosa's killer standing before him with a twisted smile.
"I'll...KILL you!"
The very earth around him splits apart with a tremendous growl. The air felt thick and heavy like smoldering flames. Balder's sorrow had given away to pure hatred. No longer were there tears upon his face but rather the fierce near demonic gaze of a man who truly lost everything.
His heart included.
---
As for his ability to do "Angel Summoning", when I apped this game last time--The mods then didn't have much of an issue with his powers as long as I nerfed them a little. I can completely take out his ability to summon angel if this is truly problematic. However, I wasn't aware that this would be an issue.