Okay, I've taken the issues into account and changed my application! There were a lot of grammatical errors to fish out, as well as a huge change to the personality section, so I think it would be more efficient if it were just read again instead of posting all the changes here.

Also, I want to thank Ryn, and in turn the whole mod team for giving me so much help with the revisions; you all deserve a plate of your desired flavor of cookies fresh from the oven for all you've done for me <3.