While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

We noticed a few things in your app while reading it that we would like to see changed. First there are several tense changes in your sample. We also noticed some grammar issues (it's instead of its for example) and spelling problems that spellcheck may not have caught.

Also, while we aren't asking for changes about this in your application we noticed your writing style seems to consist of a lot of short, choppy sentences. Reading through and working on the flow of your writing would overall help the way it reads.

Please check through for grammar issues and tense issues in both the personality and sample sections of your app. (Not the linked sample, the one you provided in addition).

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!