While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
When looking over your application, we noticed that the personality section is very brief. Sam may not have as much screen time as other characters, but there are more facets of his personality that could have been mentioned. For instance, there's no mention of Riley, Sam's old flying partner, how he felt and dealt with that loss, nor any mention of his doubts about Bucky during both Winter Soldier and Civil War. We would like to see points like this added and the current points expanded upon so we can get a better idea of Sam's personality as a whole.
In addition, we would like you to fix the links to the wiki and sample you have provided, as they do not currently work.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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When looking over your application, we noticed that the personality section is very brief. Sam may not have as much screen time as other characters, but there are more facets of his personality that could have been mentioned. For instance, there's no mention of Riley, Sam's old flying partner, how he felt and dealt with that loss, nor any mention of his doubts about Bucky during both Winter Soldier and Civil War. We would like to see points like this added and the current points expanded upon so we can get a better idea of Sam's personality as a whole.
In addition, we would like you to fix the links to the wiki and sample you have provided, as they do not currently work.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!