While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
Unfortunately we found several issues that need to be addressed. First, we feel that the given personality is very bare bones. We would like to see you delve into the personality further. For example, what does she feel about her situation with amnesia? Secondly, because your test drive samples are so limited we would like another brief sample from you, including emotions within the mechanics of the game.
Lastly, allowing her to have the cloak and going by Lamiroir isn't an issue. Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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Unfortunately we found several issues that need to be addressed. First, we feel that the given personality is very bare bones. We would like to see you delve into the personality further. For example, what does she feel about her situation with amnesia? Secondly, because your test drive samples are so limited we would like another brief sample from you, including emotions within the mechanics of the game.
Lastly, allowing her to have the cloak and going by Lamiroir isn't an issue.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!