While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
There is one point in Kuja's personality section that we would like for you to expand upon, and that is how he handles his own mortality. It's touched upon with the quote, but because his own mortality was such a major factor in his actions, we'd like to see your thoughts on how that was changed and how he may go about it now that he has this second chance of sorts.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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There is one point in Kuja's personality section that we would like for you to expand upon, and that is how he handles his own mortality. It's touched upon with the quote, but because his own mortality was such a major factor in his actions, we'd like to see your thoughts on how that was changed and how he may go about it now that he has this second chance of sorts.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!