While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

While the current Personality section covers Sonic's positive personality, we would like to see more insight when he does have negative moments. Even if they aren't comment, they still exist. You mention the trauma, but do not go much further. We need to see what happened and how that affected him. We'd also like for you to go into more detail as to why Sonic does what he does. What are his motivations? Why does he like freedom so much?

There's also one bit of clarification we'd like to be addressed, and that is back to the trauma. You mention it occurred when he was sixteen but you have him set as fifteen for the application. We are aware that the canon is all over the place for ages, but for consistency's sake we'd like for you to clarify or at least note about it.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!