While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
In regards to your personality section, we feel it can use more detail since it gives instances of canon events instead of more character-centric specifications. In particular, you mention certain incidents, but there is little about how the character actually feels, relates to, or reacts to them. Furthermore, in regards to her "Threat level: Low" ranking being linked to her danmaku ability and the "Though mentioned to have no weaknesses when it comes to martial arts" as mentioned in your app, we find these two points contradictory through reading the supplemental material.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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In regards to your personality section, we feel it can use more detail since it gives instances of canon events instead of more character-centric specifications. In particular, you mention certain incidents, but there is little about how the character actually feels, relates to, or reacts to them. Furthermore, in regards to her "Threat level: Low" ranking being linked to her danmaku ability and the "Though mentioned to have no weaknesses when it comes to martial arts" as mentioned in your app, we find these two points contradictory through reading the supplemental material.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!