While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
The current sample is a bit too generic and short to give us a solid idea as to how you will portray Ken. It doesn't have to be lengthy, but we would like some introspection or a bit more dialogue that could help better show Ken's character and make him distinctive from someone else. Something that will help us think, "Ah, yeah that's definitely Ken."
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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The current sample is a bit too generic and short to give us a solid idea as to how you will portray Ken. It doesn't have to be lengthy, but we would like some introspection or a bit more dialogue that could help better show Ken's character and make him distinctive from someone else. Something that will help us think, "Ah, yeah that's definitely Ken."
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!