While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
The current personality hits all the basic marks, but given Ludger's nature as a "silent" protagonist, we'd like to see a bit more as to how you plan to play him. We would like you to expand more on Ludger's thoughts and opinions on having to deal with the fractured dimensions. You do mention it in the application, but since it is a large part of his character we'd like to see more of how he progresses as he learns more about them. In addition, we'd like to see a bit more on how Ludger interacts with the cast, especially toward Elle, Julius, and Fractured Milla.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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The current personality hits all the basic marks, but given Ludger's nature as a "silent" protagonist, we'd like to see a bit more as to how you plan to play him. We would like you to expand more on Ludger's thoughts and opinions on having to deal with the fractured dimensions. You do mention it in the application, but since it is a large part of his character we'd like to see more of how he progresses as he learns more about them. In addition, we'd like to see a bit more on how Ludger interacts with the cast, especially toward Elle, Julius, and Fractured Milla.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!