While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
You do a very thorough job in discussing Loki as he is prior to the second movie, but there is very little in terms of how he is and develops in Thor 2. There is also a lack of any mention about his mother. Since your canon point places him after these events, we'd like you to expand it to include how he develops and what changes or doesn't change.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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You do a very thorough job in discussing Loki as he is prior to the second movie, but there is very little in terms of how he is and develops in Thor 2. There is also a lack of any mention about his mother. Since your canon point places him after these events, we'd like you to expand it to include how he develops and what changes or doesn't change.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!