While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

While your samples are well done, we would like more information pertaining to her personality. If you can, please elaborate on how the statement about Reimu aiming "for a nonviolent peace to spread across the land" reflects her current methods in dealing with youkai in a "kick their ass, then talk’" or "merciless" way.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!