While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like for you to discuss the SL-9 incident, particularly how it affected Ema and what she had to go through both at the time of the case and when it resurfaced.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
Revision
We would like for you to discuss the SL-9 incident, particularly how it affected Ema and what she had to go through both at the time of the case and when it resurfaced.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!