While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

The Personality section is succinct and hits all of her points, but there are two points we'd like for you to expand a bit more on.

If possible, could you tell us how she handles or what she thinks about her own emotional rage? Does she just accept it as part of herself without any issue or is she aware of being a problem and wants to change it?

You also touched on her actions against Museum and what they've done to her in the background section. We'd like to see you bring that topic and address how it particularly affects her personality. For example, consider questions like how it that is her motivation, what actions it leads her to doing, how it might alter her mindset and opinions on things in relation to Museum.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!