After a lot of deliberation, we've determined that the revisions were inadequate to fulfill our requests. Although you brought up the points asked for and touched upon them, it still only reached a surface understanding of the character. We don't require an in-depth analysis of the character, but for a character like Bruce, there are nuances and developments that need to be discussed more fully than what you have currently.

For example, we asked about Bruce's development between the movies and although you answered the suicide question, as far as we can that was all that was added. We didn't see much more fleshed out. In addition, although we didn't specifically ask for it, there were opportunities for you to bring up and include more about his relationships with other characters that would lend to his transition from The Incredible Hulk to being part of the Avengers. Because this is an important part of Bruce's development, more time was needed to be spent on it.

We do think you have a basic grasp of the character, but for our standards it's not enough and suggest a canon review to help. If you still wish to apply for this character for the next cycle, we hope you keep what we mentioned in mind.