While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
Unfortunately the current sample doesn't really show us a good representation of the character as a whole. It's a good example of emotional use, but we have difficulty hearing her voice. If you could provide an expansion to show her interacting with NPCs or more of her inner thought process, that will help flesh it out.
Could you also clarify on how Reimu can sense auras?
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Unfortunately the current sample doesn't really show us a good representation of the character as a whole. It's a good example of emotional use, but we have difficulty hearing her voice. If you could provide an expansion to show her interacting with NPCs or more of her inner thought process, that will help flesh it out.
Could you also clarify on how Reimu can sense auras?
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!