While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

After reading through Riley's application, we noticed there were a few historical discrepancies between the two. For instance, although mentioned in Rliey's, Aiden's application doesn't mention trying to find the wolf who killed his parents. So we'd like for you to go through and make sure both applications mesh and just fill in any other points that were mistakenly missed.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!