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Empatheias Mods ([personal profile] simpathis) wrote 2017-02-06 06:25 am (UTC)

Revision

While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

Your application is very thorough! However, we would like to see a different sample, as the current one is a bit too hard to follow due to the thread's format (multiple conversations at once).

Additionally, we have a question about an aspect of Dray's character. Sexual activities are perfectly fine and allowed in the game, but you mention in his personality his need for sex as a coping mechanism. We were wondering how that was going to play out or be worked with in a game like Empatheias, where such needs aren't really stressed as a whole. We do also allow minors to join into the game, so there would likely need to be a permission post depending on how it's done.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!

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