While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

The current personality section does give a good insight into Zephyr's character, but we would like to see some expansion (at least a paragraph) on how she thinks of and treats others, from acquaintances to enemies, if she has them, to close friends and family.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!