While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We'd like to understand more of your portrayal of May's personality through her interactions with Team Aqua and Archie. How did the weather crisis affect her, and what are her feelings on those responsible for it? Additionally, May is canonically only 12 or 13 in the series, and we would like a more specific canonpoint, given the importance of the post-game plot.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We'd like to understand more of your portrayal of May's personality through her interactions with Team Aqua and Archie. How did the weather crisis affect her, and what are her feelings on those responsible for it? Additionally, May is canonically only 12 or 13 in the series, and we would like a more specific canonpoint, given the importance of the post-game plot.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!