While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
In the interest of remaining consistent and being fair to our pre-existing FFXIV players, we cannot allow Irhya to be apped as a Warrior of Light, even if she would not be present in the memories of the other characters, since the FFXIV storyline is very much built around there being a singular Warrior of Light driving the story. Otherwise, her pre-game history and personality are solid. We would like to see a revised background that gives her a place in the world apart from being the Warrior of Light.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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In the interest of remaining consistent and being fair to our pre-existing FFXIV players, we cannot allow Irhya to be apped as a Warrior of Light, even if she would not be present in the memories of the other characters, since the FFXIV storyline is very much built around there being a singular Warrior of Light driving the story. Otherwise, her pre-game history and personality are solid. We would like to see a revised background that gives her a place in the world apart from being the Warrior of Light.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!