While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like a more detailed explanation of Ren's abilities. Exactly how much stronger and faster is he than the average person? Will he heal quickly from a stab wound or regenerate an entire limb? Exactly how does his ability to erase memories function? Please note that if we do allow him to keep his memory erasing abilities, it will require a permission post to be used.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like a more detailed explanation of Ren's abilities. Exactly how much stronger and faster is he than the average person? Will he heal quickly from a stab wound or regenerate an entire limb? Exactly how does his ability to erase memories function? Please note that if we do allow him to keep his memory erasing abilities, it will require a permission post to be used.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!