While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
As it stands, your personality section feels a little short for what is a main character in the movie. We would like to see some expansion on how Finn's compassion comes out, as well as how he interacts with others in ways other than his protectiveness. Additionally, if you were to move much of what you have in the alignment section into the personality proper, that would also be helpful for us in judging the application. Simply referring to base personality traits already mentioned in the personality is all we need for alignment justification.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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As it stands, your personality section feels a little short for what is a main character in the movie. We would like to see some expansion on how Finn's compassion comes out, as well as how he interacts with others in ways other than his protectiveness. Additionally, if you were to move much of what you have in the alignment section into the personality proper, that would also be helpful for us in judging the application. Simply referring to base personality traits already mentioned in the personality is all we need for alignment justification.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!