While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

First, while you have lots of samples for us, we would like to see an additional sample that focuses on portraying Guy's voice and mannerisms. In addition, we would like to see some expansion on Guy's thoughts regarding Van's plots and how he felt when they were revealed to him, given their close relationship.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!