While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We recall that we asked for a bit of extrapolation on the relationship between Guy and Van, but we do not see that represented in the application. We would like for you to add a bit regarding that into your application; it can be what you provided last time!
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We recall that we asked for a bit of extrapolation on the relationship between Guy and Van, but we do not see that represented in the application. We would like for you to add a bit regarding that into your application; it can be what you provided last time!
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!