Unfortunately we've determined that your application had too many errors or did not meet up to our standards to allow a revision. These are the concerns with your application:

The personality section as written does not appear to accurately reflect the character in canon. Too many inconsistencies exist between the two, such as the fact that Shuichi is less easygoing in canon, more lacking the will to argue. With regard to the writing samples, they also don't reflect this reluctance and don't match up with the character in the game. The general writing sample also is rather brief, not having enough interactions to really get a grasp of the character. With these concerns in mind, we feel that it would be best that if you still wish to apply the character that you thoroughly review the canon to provide a more comprehensive application at a later date.

You are free to reapply for this or any other character in the next cycle.