While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We'd like to see some more expansion on Coran's strengths and flaws as shown in canon, such as him insisting he knows best and how he deals with the consequences of that thinking. We would also like to see some more of Coran's history, whether it's via a wiki link or a written explanation of how he contributed to the story in seasons 1 and 2.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We'd like to see some more expansion on Coran's strengths and flaws as shown in canon, such as him insisting he knows best and how he deals with the consequences of that thinking. We would also like to see some more of Coran's history, whether it's via a wiki link or a written explanation of how he contributed to the story in seasons 1 and 2.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!