Unfortunately we've determined that your application had too many errors or did not meet up to our standards to allow a revision. These are the concerns with your application:

Unfortunately, we are not able to accept your application at this time.The personality section reads more like a history and includes a number of namedrops without context or explanation as to why they are relevant, and the section as a whole feels disjointed and difficult to follow. The application does not convey a strong understanding of how or why she is the way she is, and much of the information that is presented concerning her personality is contradictory. The samples provided also have a number of grammatical errors, and we feel they do not properly showcase the character's personality.

You are free to reapply for this character or any other character in the next cycle.