While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We currently do not see a proper emotion sample. If we somehow missed it, please link us to the comment, otherwise we just need you to write a short sample (can be just a paragraph!) of the character's emotions directly affecting the environment around them. Make sure that the effect is clearly indicated!
In addition, given how the major choices that Robin can make near the end of the game can effect his personality, we would like to see the personality section edited to convey which choice was made and how it will effect his character. Fire Emblem: Warriors information should also be disregarded and removed, as it is not relevant to Awakening canon.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We currently do not see a proper emotion sample. If we somehow missed it, please link us to the comment, otherwise we just need you to write a short sample (can be just a paragraph!) of the character's emotions directly affecting the environment around them. Make sure that the effect is clearly indicated!
In addition, given how the major choices that Robin can make near the end of the game can effect his personality, we would like to see the personality section edited to convey which choice was made and how it will effect his character. Fire Emblem: Warriors information should also be disregarded and removed, as it is not relevant to Awakening canon.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!