While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
Before we can properly judge your application, we would like an explanation for what a Reality Marble is and what it can do. In addition, the app is difficult to follow due to several grammatical and typographical errors, including missing words and sentence fragments, and requires further proofreading and editing.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
Revision
Before we can properly judge your application, we would like an explanation for what a Reality Marble is and what it can do. In addition, the app is difficult to follow due to several grammatical and typographical errors, including missing words and sentence fragments, and requires further proofreading and editing.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!