While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
At the moment, the personality section reads too much like a history section. We would like to see a more streamlined personality section that focuses mostly on Rose Quartz' traits, rather than detailing everything about her past.
In addition, the OOC section of the application is missing, and needs to be added before we can process the application.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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At the moment, the personality section reads too much like a history section. We would like to see a more streamlined personality section that focuses mostly on Rose Quartz' traits, rather than detailing everything about her past.
In addition, the OOC section of the application is missing, and needs to be added before we can process the application.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!