While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like a more detailed explanation of Cloche's abilities, such as the specifics of her song magic, how things are triggered in her Cosmosphere, what Replekia is, how it connects with IPDs, and a brief explanation of what IPDs are, so that we can come to an appropriate verdict regarding her abilities.
In addition, our team has some concerns over the flippant use of a slur ("retard") as an insult in the personality section. We feel that it verges on a violation of our game rules, and we would ask that you reword this mention and take care to be respectful within the game in the future.
As a final note, while your emotional sample is long enough to count for a general sample as well, we do not accept threads older than a year as valid samples.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like a more detailed explanation of Cloche's abilities, such as the specifics of her song magic, how things are triggered in her Cosmosphere, what Replekia is, how it connects with IPDs, and a brief explanation of what IPDs are, so that we can come to an appropriate verdict regarding her abilities.
In addition, our team has some concerns over the flippant use of a slur ("retard") as an insult in the personality section. We feel that it verges on a violation of our game rules, and we would ask that you reword this mention and take care to be respectful within the game in the future.
As a final note, while your emotional sample is long enough to count for a general sample as well, we do not accept threads older than a year as valid samples.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!