While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

The personality is currently too limited to give a thorough look at Lea's personality. We would like to see more on how his time as Axel changed him, as well as the darker aspects to his character displayed in the games.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!