While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like to see more on Mal's personality and how it is displayed in her interactions with other people, both friends and otherwise. While the app gives us a solid understanding of Mal's inward personality, we would like to see examples of how she presents herself and relates to others, as well as the behaviors that her personality influences.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like to see more on Mal's personality and how it is displayed in her interactions with other people, both friends and otherwise. While the app gives us a solid understanding of Mal's inward personality, we would like to see examples of how she presents herself and relates to others, as well as the behaviors that her personality influences.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!