While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like to see C.C.'s personality expanded upon, particularly regarding her relationship with Lelouch and her interactions with him. Her motives are explained well within the app, but we would like to see more of how she relates to other people and her general outward behavior.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like to see C.C.'s personality expanded upon, particularly regarding her relationship with Lelouch and her interactions with him. Her motives are explained well within the app, but we would like to see more of how she relates to other people and her general outward behavior.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!