While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

Claire's canonpoint is currently unclear. We would like to see a brief timeline that shows how the movies and games relate to each other chronologically to give us a better idea of where Claire is coming from.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!