While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We feel that this application is in need of editing, as grammatical and typographical errors make it hard to follow in places. In addition, the character would not be able to use any cartoon physics, making him subject to the same laws of physics as every other character in game.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
Revision
We feel that this application is in need of editing, as grammatical and typographical errors make it hard to follow in places. In addition, the character would not be able to use any cartoon physics, making him subject to the same laws of physics as every other character in game.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!