While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like to see a new general sample from Webby. While we understand that the character is prone to excited rambling, the current sample is difficult to follow and contains questionable content, particularly towards the end. If you would like further clarification on this, please feel free to PM the mod team and we will be more than happy to discuss this with you.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like to see a new general sample from Webby. While we understand that the character is prone to excited rambling, the current sample is difficult to follow and contains questionable content, particularly towards the end. If you would like further clarification on this, please feel free to PM the mod team and we will be more than happy to discuss this with you.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!