While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

We currently do not see a proper emotion sample. If we somehow missed it, please link us to the comment, otherwise we just need you to write a short sample (can be just a paragraph!) of the character's emotions directly affecting the environment around them. Make sure that the effect is clearly indicated!

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!