While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like to see the personality section narrowed down to focus on the version of Scarlett that will be entering the game at her particular canon point. Additionally, we would like to see the history section condensed down to the most relevant points of Scarlett's history, and further clarification on the canonpoint. There are also a few grammatical and spelling mistakes that make the application difficult to follow.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like to see the personality section narrowed down to focus on the version of Scarlett that will be entering the game at her particular canon point. Additionally, we would like to see the history section condensed down to the most relevant points of Scarlett's history, and further clarification on the canonpoint. There are also a few grammatical and spelling mistakes that make the application difficult to follow.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!